Saturday, May 8, 2010


This Semester

This semester has quickly flown by even though I know that at times it certainly did not feel like it. I can close my eyes and effortlessly visualize Mr. Mitchell, my teacher, explaining the importance of English. He encourages us to write with structure, passion, and most importantly our voice. He often mentions the word ethos, and asks us to individually search for our interpretation of the word. To me, the term ethos means ethically adding your own personality into your writing.

I remember my very first blog post as if it were yesterday. I had never done anything like this before, so the entire concept was new, interesting, and a little intimidating to me. It was amazing to create something from nothing. The ultimate feeling of success upon posting a blog, complete with graphics and hypertext, is indescribable. Initially I created a name for both myself and the webpage. I chose Sooner Words as the webpage title because I am currently a freshman at the University of Oklahoma, and the mascot is a Sooner. My signature, WrittenWithoutInk, is representative of my love of writing; however, since the written words are on a computer there is no need for ink. I was appreciative when Mr. Mitchell gave me access to my classmates' links, Performing Composition, because I could now officially comment on other blogs. I took my responsibility seriously, but allowed my ethos to be incorporated into each response.

My initial blog, Sooner Words, rhetorically analyzes a commercial advertisement that clearly reflects me. I evaluated the Coca-Cola snowball fight commercial that aired during the time of the 2010 Winter Olympics. The commercial message illustrates drinking a Coke provides happiness, laughter, and good sportsmanship. It represents me because I enjoy being with friends and acting a little impulsive. I critically examine the commercial through color usage, character development, and marketing appeal. Additionally, I focus on the director's message, intent, and methods. My ethos shines through as I closely identify with this marketing marvel of spreading joy and camaraderie.

Later on during the course of the semester, we were assigned our second paper, an Aristotelian argument. My topic dealt with the positive correlation between technology advancements and global communication. I wrote a newspaper article targeting University of Oklahoma students. I took great pride in the commentary, and once again relied on my ethos. Although it was enjoyable to write, it made me realize I no longer miss being on my high school yearbook staff.

The third paper, a Rogerian argument, caused me to jump through a few hoops due to the complexity of the subject matter. A Rogerian argument attempts to reach a compromise between two opposing perspectives. I chose simple living versus consumerism. I discovered that the Simple Living Network is an organization that motivates its followers to live simply by examining their individual core values and needs. An opposing perspective of simple living, The Ayn Rand Institute, advocates that an Objectivism philosophy is best achieved by a capitalist society thoroughly enjoying all of its rewards. To me, the most difficult concept was finding common ground between the two. After meticulous research, I determined that the common ground is the well-being of the individual. Once again, my ethos enabled me to explore my consumer habits while in pursuit of a simpler lifestyle.

The fourth assignment was a group project that was difficult at times. Requiring four strong-willed individuals to communicate and complete their work in a timely manner was stressful. Once we overcame these obstacles, we were quickly able to select photos and capture our "together" voice. The Collection Depot is my group's website. Overall, the website is a shinning masterpiece of our accomplishments and implements ethos in each of our collections.

Now it is the end of the semester, and I am definitely glad I fully participated in everything that my English class had to offer. I learned a considerable amount about myself, how to blog, how to write various forms of arguments, and most significantly how to use my ethos. Thank you Mr. Mitchell for a great semester!

4 comments:

  1. I feel like this was a great year to discover ethos, especially being a freshman and coming into Oklahoma. Now look at you, your leaving happier and as a new person and on your fast track to sophomore year. Congratulations hope everything keeps going well with your ethos.

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  2. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your blogs. You are a great writer. I'm glad you've enjoyed your year so much!

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  3. I loved learning about the Rogerian Argument because it was a challenge for me too.

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  4. I liked your blogs they are great. I like how you said thanks for a great semester Mr. Mitchell at the end. He is a great professor and I feel that this semester was a good one.

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